2013年10月16日 星期三

Annotation1:save the (D:) or lover?

Source1:改變是大腦的天性
Source2:每次都為了看A片跟男友吵架
Source3:台灣男生冷落女友

With my argument on "Should  men and women accept their lover to watch the adult video or not?", I found  some sources to prove my opposition.
I found a website made by a famous brain scientist 洪蘭 in Taiwan. And in the website she introduced  her book which discussed about brain's every reaction. According to one of paragraph in this book, it talked about "people's addiction". 

It mentioned that through some experiments, our brain's plasticity was related to dopamine(多巴胺). When our nerve received the instruction from cerebrum and then complete it, dopamine could let the nerve get more stable. Easy to say, the more dopamine, the connection of nerve would get more tight, this is the reason why we have addition. And once this kind of energy accumulate too much on nerve, it will cause an irreversible change, that means even people get rid of addiction eventually, brain will still memorize this influence. 


So my opinion is "sexual addiction" is without exception as well, I think people was addicted to watch adult video probably. 


Another point connect in above-mentioned paragraph, it said "Some people say that adult video provide people a healthy pleasure, can liberated from the sexual tension, however adult video is addictive, and provide resistance, actually it may reduce the feeling of happiness. People who addicted to adult video will long for adult video but don't like it; people who continued to watch adult video will think their lover were unattractive, and would rather watch adult video than dating with real person." It means that adult video may let people cannot tell reality from fantasy.





Further, in fact this issue is a trouble to the girls mostly. Because of this worry, they will try to ask some advise on the Internet after their lover did not consider their annoyance as a problem.(source2) Then usually they will get some users' responses that told them to understand their lover, even told them"Rather let your boyfriend watch adult video without make an extramarital affair." These kind of opinion usually make girls compromise. Someone may also said that watching adult video was just for physiological needs. But why especially someone already had a beloved still need to rely on watching adult video? There is another news about this issue.(source3) 


Even if watching adult video won't be addiction to everyone, does this behavior won't let people fall into the fictitious and porn world? After all adult videos are still commodities, a commercial practices, include many unrealistic and exaggerating content to fascinate viewer. So I convinced that watching adult videos could generate some over illusion. Therefore, this topic is not only against on "man" watch adult video, is about your "lover" who need to watch adult video as before would might cause influence between your relationship.

16 則留言:

  1. Your main point has changed from our topic to should human watch adult videos.
    To your point, you also can mean that most of the movie also should be forbidden because they involved violence or porn
    to be continued...

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  2. It mentioned that through some experimentS,

    "in fact this issue is always a trouble to the girls mostly"
    maybe you can change to:"in fact, this is always a trouble to most of the girls"

    "Even if watching adult video..."
    i think it is strange to use "even if", although is not that strange



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  3. "The above source which I found was a website made" i think you can shorten to "There is a website established by...and she introduce.... " or the second sentence you can choose to begin a new sentence.

    "When our nerveS"

    "Another point connectS"

    Another point connect in above-mentioned paragraph, it said...
    i think you can just quote the sentences without it said...

    can liberated-can liberate

    , however adult video is addictive, and
    it is better to begin a new sentence.However...

    People who addicted to adult video will long for adult video but don't like it;
    what does this sentence mean? i couldn't get it.

    let people cannot tell reality or fantasy.
    tell....from

    in fact this ...
    in fact, this.....

    Because this worry
    because OF this worry

    some advise
    some adviseS

    through the Internet
    "I think ON Internet" is better

    This is my opinions, you can discuss with me:)

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  4. it's great to connect to 洪蘭's experiment and explain in a more scientific way.
    and I think you can gain more info about men and women's different perspectives to accentuate ur points!

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  5. It an interesting title. But I think what you emphasize in the article is that men shouldn't watch adult video. It seems that your title lays more stress on the relationship between a girl and her boyfriend who likes to watch adult video. I think you can find more resources to support your point.

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  6. You make your standpoint rather clear. But I think you can state more about the reaction of girls who found out their boyfriends watch adult movies. Maybe you could do some survey about it.

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  7. This is an interesting issue to talk about, and very close to our everyday life. I like how vigorous your presentation is. You gave a lot of points from the girls' view, and talked about girls' feelings, but I would definitely like to know how boys think about this. Like Kevin said, he don't want her girlfriend to compare himself to the actors in porn.

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  8. Your topic is so fresh and interesting. haha. i do agree with your points mentioned above that watching adult movies would have bad influence to one's personality or behavior. However, i would like to ask that if the one who watches adult movies only regarded as a kind of entertainment to kill time? what i mean is, if they are not addicted, they still own normal and regular lifestyle, would it still be that bad to watch adult movies?

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  9. Asking classmate to give opinions is a great way to catch the attention. I like your topics and I think it is good to point out the exaggerate and commercial part of the adult video.

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  10. Asking all the classmates' opinions is good and can make everyone focused. You two have picked an interesting topic I think. And I really expect the later annotations:)

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  11. The thesis you hold goes as same as mine that the addiction to audlt video may eventually play a havoc on real relationship, especially the lovership. I think to this point you can provide more stalistic evidence to help your idea more concrete

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  12. Your topic really draws my attention, and your presentation is impressive. Your point about compromise puts me in a thoughtful mood. I expect to learn more things from your following composition.

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  13. I like the way you two discuss your issue papers. The method of asking questions can catch our attention successfully. As your part, your representation is lively and clear for me to understand your standpoint. But if your speaking become more fluent, your representation will be more attractive.

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  14. I agree with you that if boyfriends just take adult video for pastime, then the couples should face the problem and try to do anything else. But I think you should make your points (especially about construction of brain) more clear in your presentation.

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  15. under your picture you should add "figure 1. (name or some words)'
    Since you talk about men's addiction, maybe you can limit your topic according to this assumption to make your point more powerful and more interesting. And during your presentation, ''嗯''appeared a little bit too often.
    I cannot imagine that men would be addicted to adult videos but i do believe that adult videos would influence relationship between lovers.

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  16. The way you presented your annotation was quite interesting and impressive, it had no doubt that you caught our attention successfully. I could see that you felt relaxed on stage through your body languages. However, it would be better if you can organize your thought before you say it out, this will make audience undstand your meaning easily.

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